2008年10月3日 星期五

Writing

Alex Tang

I forgot everything I've done,
About the fake , the truth.
While we sit and see the sun,
The end of black & all the youth.

Now would treat my friend as you .
How could I forget the rules we use.
Feed my cat & dog as fool.
Do you refuse to throw my shoes.

The Not yet finished 14 line.
The rules : whole Poems is only about love, love & love .
Use the English Style (Shakespearean Sonnet)
  • 3 Quatrains + Couplet
  • Quatrains rhymed a-b-a-b, c-d-c-d, e-f-e-f
  • Couplet rhymed g-g
The third quatrain generally introduces an unexpected sharp thematic or imagistic "turn" called a volta

The only Main Theme : no matter how bad the situation is, It is great to be myself since I have you.
Aiken & I were in the same writing class, we keep on wrote wrote & wrote.
While come to this issue , we say" oh ".
How could we write something about love!
And we told the teacher we almost forgot what is love.
So we got the first line I forgot everything I've done, as the main rhythm.